Greetings! Week
number three and still on target. Seriously, it sounds stupid, but I'm deliriously
happy the posts are becoming a habit.
Snippet Sunday this
week features a scene from a manuscript thisclose to being finished. A few more
scenes and off to the beta readers it goes.
I'll be honest, the
story for this could be a little triggerish for some, but it does have a great
conflict, if I do say so.
Here's the tag
line:
Mix a potential marriage proposal, a close call, and her
boyfriend's hot brother and Chloe Timmons might possibly come away with
something very wonderful.
And now a wee sneaky peek at Boyfriend's Brother…
Jason envied his brother. Marc
could be an immature brat, but he'd found the woman of his dreams. And Jason
actually liked her, even after a completely bizarre introduction where he
mistook Chloe Timmons for an exotic dancer.
In his defense, she had been
practically giving Marc a lap dance at the time.
Jason winced when he remembered
the scathing set down he'd delivered to Marc and the 'dancer'.
He'd roughly pulled the woman
straddling his brother's legs off and gave her a nasty look. "I'm not sure
what he paid you, but he's not gonna get his money's worth. Unless you want to
finish with me." He raked his eyes over the prettier than expected dancer.
"I'm always up for lewd displays in public."
Turning, Jason glared toward
Marc. "As for you…I come here to meet your latest and greatest and instead
you've got a hot piece of ass gyrating on your lap." He shook his head.
"Are you stupid…or did the woman of your dreams finally wise up and dump
you?"
The dancer laughed. "Wow. I
would have been insulted enough to punch you if you hadn't gone all chivalrous
at the end." She stepped in front of him and stuck out her hand.
"Chloe Timmons. You must be big brother, Jason."
Jason automatically shook her
hand, a hot flush of heat burning his face.
She
looked in Marc's direction, whispering with exaggeration. "Your brother
thinks I have a hot ass. I like him already." Glancing back, she raised a
brow. "Woman of his dreams? Is that Marc's description or yours?"
Honestly? Chloe is
so much fun to write. Here's hoping I can get this one finished up and
submitted soon.
Up next week? A snippet from another almost completed manuscript.
Catch everyone on
the flip side,
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